注意：1. 词数100左右

【答案】

Dear classmates,

After mid-term exam we’ll visit places of great interest in Yangzhou. At 8:00 a.m. we’ll meet at the school gate and get on the bus. We’ll visit the Slender West Lake and the Bamboo Garden and take some photos.

After dinner, we’ll go to the Zhu Yu Park to see the pandas and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

In the evening, we’ll go to Dongguan Street to do some shopping, enjoy Yangzhou snacks and learn to make a fruit salad in the DIY store.

Remember 100 yuan per person. After the visit I will put the pictures on the Internet for the students to visit.

I hope all of you will ha ve a good time then.

Best wishes

John

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以班长的名义写一封信，向全班同学发出邀请，并对行程和交通工具做出安排。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如places of great interest, take some photos, do some shopping。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。