4．在金仓湖还可以划船、放风筝、环湖骑行和玩游戏

【答案】

Dear Millie,

We are going to have a picnic at Jincang Lake this Sunday. It is spring now. The flowers come out and the trees turn green. We all think Jincang Lake is a good place to have a picnic. My friends and I will meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Sunday morning and take the bus there. It will take us about half an hour. We are going to bring some food, water and snacks. When we get to the lake, we can row boats on it. It is the best time to fly kites there too. We can also ride bikes around the lake or play games there. I am sure we will have a good time. Would you like to come with us?

Yours,

Windy

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Wendy的身份给Millie写一封邀请信，邀请他去金仓湖去野餐。题目中给我们列出了短文中需要包含的要点，如见面的时间、地点、需要带哪些东西以及在那里可以做些什么等。我们可以根据这些内容的提示，用正确的英语表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文中我们主要使用的时态是一般将来时，根据表达的需要，也可能会使用一般现在时态，人称以第一人称为主。写作时，需要注意使用正确的谓语动词的形式及单复数形式，注意使用一些连词，如and，when等，和我们学过的句型，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，首先短文中包含了题目要求的所有要点，如先解释为什么去金仓湖去野餐，他们集合的时间和地点和一些注意事项等。其次这篇短文的时态和人称都符合题目的要求，以一般将来时为主，如短文中出现的will或者是be going to 结构，这些时态和人称的使用非常准确。最后作者写作时还使用了较好的句型，如We all think Jincang Lake is a good place to have a picnic中a good place to do sth.；It will take us about half an hour.中使用了take表示花费的句型；When we get to the lake, we can row boats on it.中使用了when引导的时间状语从句；I am sure we will have a good time中be sure that从句等。这些句式使文意更加连贯。