但你忙于准备高考，不得不谢绝邀请

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

I strongly recommend my friend May, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of the traditional Chinese painting, which, together with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息给朋友写一封谢绝邀请信。内容包括：谢绝邀请，说明理由，推荐朋友May参加，并说明原因。等信息。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，有效地将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如：动词不定式的用法，宾语从句，定语从句，表语从句和一些好的短语take this opportunity，strongly recommend，has a good knowledge of，together with等等。